Professional Script Assessment

Your biggest obstacle isn’t talent.

It’s understanding how Hollywood actually works.

Ideas that could make fantastic movies die every day not because they’re bad, but because they’re misaligned with how scripts are developed, evaluated and moved forward in the real industry.

While there is no shortage of people offering “script notes,” very few have actually sold a screenplay, had a feature film produced or possess real-world experience in the film and television business.

Welcome to the rare opportunity to get direct, personal feedback from a working professional who has written, produced and collaborated at the highest levels of the business—alongside Oscar-winning legends and major studios.

CHANGE NOT JUST YOUR SCRIPT BUT YOUR CAREER AS A WRITER

YOUR ASSESSMENT INCLUDES...

1) A full page-by-page professional read

Jim will go through your screenplay with an eye for story, structure, character, theme and commercial potential.

2) Detailed written notes

You’ll receive clear, actionable feedback covering:

• What’s working and why
• Key opportunities to tighten, elevate or clarify your story
• Strategic notes on market positioning and pitching

3) One-hour video or phone consultation

Jim will personally walk you through his notes in a live conversation so you can ask questions, explore suggestions and plan your next steps with confidence.

MORE ABOUT JIM...

About Jim

Jim Agnew is a screenwriter and producer who has written and produced multiple feature films alongside directors like Dario Argento and John Carpenter and actors such as Nicolas Cage, Adrien Brody and Jean-Claude Van Damme.

Known for developing commercially driven genre films that travel well internationally, Agnew is skilled at working within tight budgets and challenging production environments.

In addition to his produced credits, Agnew continues to develop original film and television projects while remaining actively involved in the business side of filmmaking, including financing, production strategy and international co-productions.

Jim Agnew