Your idea might be strong. Your execution might abe great.
But if your script doesn’t align with how Hollywood actually works, it will never move forward.
Jim Agnew's professional script assessments provide direct, honest feedback from a working film professional who has written, produced and collaborated with major studios and Oscar-winning talent.
Detailed feedback on story structure, character, pacing and market viability.
Understand how your script would actually be evaluated by producers and studios.
Clear next steps so you know exactly how to strengthen the script.
Because Jim's expertise doesn't lend itself to every genre and because this is a labor-intensive, individualized service, we have made this an application-only opportunity.
If you fill out our short application form, we'll be able to assess if you're a good fit.
We strive to help as many people as we can so if you are a fit and Jim's slots are currently taken, we can add you to our waiting list.
If you are accepted, the investment is 2 payments of $500.




Apply for consideration.
Jim or someone on his team will let you know if you have been accepted. If accepted, you will send your script, along with a 50% deposit.
Jim will read your script, make extensive notes and then have a roughly one-hour call with you, where he'll go over the notes and provide feedback and strategic guidance on what works, what doesn’t and what to do next.
Jim's produced scripts are in the horror, action and drama genres. In other words, if you have a romantic comedy, he is not your guy. Anything else? He us.
Jim will read and evaluate your script, then have a roughly one-hour call with you, where he'll give you his feedback and strategic guidance on what works, what doesn’t and what to do next. After the call, you'll receive detailed notes so that you're ready to take your next steps.
This is a professional assessment combined with industry insight—not the sort of basic "assistant" coverage you might get from a production company. Jim's experience in both screenwriting and production means that he'll be able to provide advice on both the writing and the reality of getting your movie made.
ONCE YOUR SPACE HAS BEEN SECURED, JIM WILL REQUEST YOUR SCRIPT. PLEASE ALLOW 2 WEEKS BETWEEN SUBMISSION AND CONSULTATION.
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